Showing posts with label Annotation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Annotation. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Peace Like a River- Annotation

          As I began to read Peace Like a River by Leif Enger, I noticed several different motifs throughout the story. In many instances water is mentioned, not only in liquid form but in gas and solid forms as well. Breathing, dreams, and miracles are also a few motifs that Enger uses to convey meaning in his story. What I would like to focus on is the motif that I feel is overlooked. There is a strong bird motif in this story and I believe they represent much, even help the reader understand the story to the fullest.

          Throughout this book Enger use a particular species of bird, the crow. The moment that struck me the most in the book was, when the crow is spotted in the middle of the highway. Swede sees something in the middle of the road and asks Jeremiah, her father, what is ahead. Jeremiah replies saying, “Can’t tell” (Enger, 133) in turn Swede continues to gaze farther down the road. Jeremiah, Swede, and Reuben begin to think that the object in the middle of the road is just a bag of trash, but as they approach the object closer they notice that it is a dead crow. The importance in all of this is the description and characteristic of the crow. The narrator describes the crow, “struck by a car it lay all mashed to the road but for one free wing, which rose and fell by the gusts…a dead crow lying in the road out in the heart of no place, and just before we reached it the wind brought up that wing again so it looked like a thing asking for mercy” (Enger, 133). The way Enger described such a simple detail in the story gives the reader reason or idea to look more into why this road kill was described so well and with so much detail.

          Reading this book I could not help but reflect back to this page in understanding the rest of the story. I feel that Enger’s description of the crow is foreshadowing future events that happen in the book. The narrator, Reuben, goes on informing the reader what dad says about the dead crow, “All the years I spent in North Dakota, that’s the first crow I ever saw hit on the road…they’re awfully smart birds, they get out of the way” (Enger,133). After reading the whole novel I can now see that this alluded to much later in the story. The crow is a type of bird and birds symbolize freedom.

          I took this idea of freedom a little further and began to see Davy as a free bird. When Davy’s dad says that crows are awfully smart birds and that they usually get out of the way, it began to make me question. Davy is a smart young man but did he make a wrong decision by shooting those two boys? Did he not get away this time morally like the crow did not get away from being hit by a car? The interesting thing is that the crow, dead, looked to have been reaching up into the heavens with its wing lifted asking for mercy. One wrong move and the crow was dead, he suffered the consequences of a wrong action, mercy was not given to him. Davy made a wrong move. Davy plotted and killed two boys. Davy has broken out of jail and is on the run. He must suffer the consequences of a wrong action and mercy will not be given to him.

          Later in the story we come to learn that Davy is never caught and continues to live his life running and hiding from the law. The consequence he faces is shame and guilt. His consequences are lack of freedom to live a normal life. That crow symbolized Davy and the fact that one wrong move can make or break us.


                                             Works Cited
Enger, Lief. Peace Like a River. New York : Grove Press, 2001.

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Red and White

In the poem “Lanyard”, Billy Collins truly summarizes what we all feel for our mother or guardian at one time in our life, appreciation.  I loved reading this poem but a few things really stuck out to me.
We all know what lanyards are, but I decided to look into them a little more. From what I found lanyards are pretty ordinary and there is not much symbolism behind them. A lanyard is a piece of rope or cord or plastic that you wear to keep you from losing something (Ryan). I think this says a lot about the poem right off the bat.
 As we read we begin to see the connection of mother and son.  The man begins to look into his past of when he went to camp as a young boy. The author goes on to say that he made a boxy red and white lanyard for his mother. At first, I read the rest of the poem and skipped right over the color details. When I went back into the text, I looked up to see if the color red and white symbolized anything. In my investigate I found that red symbolizes strong emotions and white symbolizes admiration and humility (Ryan).
In an instant I thought to myself, how great is it that those colors go with the feelings of the author in the poem. Collins expresses his appreciation for his mother. All he could offer her in return for all she had supplied him with his whole life, was this red and white boxed lanyard. In everything the lanyard and its colors show the authors strong emotions for his mother, his admiration and humility towards her, as well as his desire to not want to lose that special relationship that they have. 
I loved that Collins was able to express his emotions so perfectly. We can all reflect back into our past and see what we have done for our mothers or guardians and compare what they have done for us. I believe that it is just revelation to us of how much God loves us and cares for us even though we have nothing but our lives to offer him. 

                                             Works Cited
Ryan. "Lanyard." Cadet World. Web. 02 Mar. 2011. <http://www.cadet-
           world.com/cwforums/showthread.php?25762-lanyard>.

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Bamboo Beaded Curtain

Many times we install curtains in our house to keep light from coming in or to keep people from seeing inside. In the story Hills like White Elephants we see the main characters Jig and the man in a place where there are bamboo bead curtains. This immediately causes us to question. Why is there a curtain? What is hiding behind the curtain? According to Shmoop, an internet source, “It sets us up to think about boundaries, thresholds, and separations-all the issues the couple is facing” (Shmoop). An example in the text includes, “The girl looked at the bead curtain, put her hand out and took hold of two of the strings of beads” (Hemmingway). This bamboo beaded curtain is mentioned many times throughout the entire story. I think each time it is mentioned it bring us back and helps us realize that there is a separation in beliefs between Jig and the man. We see Jig having a very hard time deciding to keep her baby or whether to abort it while the man is pressuring her to abort the baby. At the same time the man is manipulating her so that whether to keep the baby or not is her decisions but in all reality it is his. The curtain between the two characters is Jigs wanting the baby and the man not wanted the baby. The curtain can also be seen as separating different sides of life. “It can also be seen as a homage to the other pastime that so fascinated him [the man]-drinking” (Shmoop).This is shown by the picture of Anis Del Toro on the curtain which is a type of alcohol. The man is not ready to give up the life he was living before.
I would also like to point out the importance and symbolism of the train stations and the luggage of the Jigs and the man. “Train stations, airports, bus stations, and ports...give us the sense of transition of being between worlds, between experiences” (Shmoop). We see that Jig and the man are in between life where they are forced to make a decision that will forever change their lives. Many times we find ourselves in the same spot. We must decide whether it is in our best interest to do or not do something that could alter our life.
There were many forms of symbolism in the story Hills like White Elephants and the more we see hidden meanings the more we really start to realize the sadness of the text and the reality of it. We can all sit back and relate in some way.

Works Cited

"Hills Like White Elephants" Hypertext." Virginia Commonwealth University College Of Humanities and Sciences.Web.09 Feb.2011.<http://www.has.vcu.edu/eng/webtext/hills/hills.htm>.

"Hills Like White Elephants Symbolism, Imagery & Allegory." Shmoop: Study Guides & Teacher Resources.Web.09 Feb.2011.<http://www.shmoop.com/hills-like-white-elephants/symbolism-imagery.html>.